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		<title>Story-Editing Notes</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here is a list of things to watch out for when polishing your stories: Spell out numbers. Don&#8217;t have characters suspended in a vacuum. Create a scene. So instead of saying he said, she said at the end of dialogue, (which are called tags), tell us who is speaking by having the character move, or [...]]]></description>
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